Yesterday, my English program arranged International Day. My English program will arrange international every year in the 22nd February. There were ten booths such as Australian , Canadian , and Chinese booths. And there were many activities such as singing contest, show (Indian Dance, Cowboy Dance) and Tasting international food.
I had some booths for recommence. It was Chinese booths. Chinese booths was beautiful booth and interesting. There were some food to tasty such as Dim Sum and Kuay Teow Lui Suan. Next, The Philippines booth had milk candies that it was delicious. I like it. And the booth had angel stationed at booth. She is very beautiful. And finally, I had booth for recommence. It was Australian booth. There was cheese cracker that it was delicious. And I want to go to Australia.
In the fair, there were many activities. I like singing contest. Every competitor song sweetly. There were many shows from students such as Indian dance and Cowboy dance. In each booth had tasting national food which is very delicious.
I feel very happy and enjoyed eating in each booth. Each booth is interesting and beautiful. I want to eat national food more than this, but it nothing left. And I feel good to getting many knowledge from each booth.
'Chinese booths' in fact' there is one booth. You forget to put article in front of 'beautiful booth'.
ตอบลบIt should be "recommend" not "recommence".
ตอบลบI like International Day
ตอบลบI like story
ตอบลบYou use wrong the prepositions “In the fair” change “in” to be “at” and you forgot a few articles.
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