วันพุธที่ 12 มีนาคม พ.ศ. 2557

My Own Story

         I am a student at Nakhon Pathom Rajabhat university. Ispend the most of time at university. On the weekend, I go to university that I wear university's uniform every time. In 1 day, I have to do many homeworks in worksheets. Everybody pays attention to their homework. My friend is drawing on white board.She has beautiful handwriting. She has many white board markers and many colours. She always brings it. In every day, I always wear a sweater because it can sunblock. I have a friend. She is talkative. She can talk every time. In class room, there are only one friend that has many accessories. She wears  not the same accessories in some day. She has many handbags too. After that, I go to the market to buy cub cake and a water drink.
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  1. Unknown15 มีนาคม 2557 เวลา 08:14

    You forget to take a space between "I" and "spend" in the sentence "Ispend the most of time ..." in line 1.

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  2. Unknown15 มีนาคม 2557 เวลา 20:43

    You wrote the word 'cub cake' wrong cub means animal baby such as lion, bear or tiger. So the correct word is cup cake :')

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  3. Unknown16 มีนาคม 2557 เวลา 05:33

    many colours May be many colour (no S)

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  4. Unknown16 มีนาคม 2557 เวลา 06:20

    It is wonderful

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  5. sujittra18 มีนาคม 2557 เวลา 04:22

    You forgot a space in “Ispend the most of time at university.” So, in this word university's uniform, you forgot to add “s”, and you said only in this sentence “there are only one friend that has many accessories” but you used “are”, you must use “is”

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