วันพฤหัสบดีที่ 13 มีนาคม พ.ศ. 2557

Choosing My Future

            In the past, I not lived with my mother and father because they were young. Therefore, the older relatives were raise me. My aunt was teach me read a book. My grandfather was spend tuition fee until I was junior high school. My father and mother also were raise me. I studied Science-Math at Rachineeburana school. I wanted to be a veterinarian, but my older relatives need to study English Education. Even though I would pass an exam many university. They were not allow study. I had not the choice.
             In the present, I study at Nakhon Pathom Rajabhat university. I study about English education. Before I studied this place. I felt very stress because of English language. I have a not good basic, but I am trying to develop in English language.
              In the future, I will be a good teacher. As a result, I will concentrate on my studies for teaching in the future. If today I do not concentrate in learning, I also can not teaching student. However, I could not study in my dream place, so I will the best concentrate in the present.

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  1. What verb do you use was or teach? (you have to change the word teach to be taught). What does this sentence means 'I have a not good basic' did you mean you are not good in English right? On my study is not 'on my studies '

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  2. In the sentence "Before I studied this place. I felt very stress ..." . I think you shout add preposition in front of the word "this place" and you should use " , " take place " . " between this 2 sentences because it is continue.

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  4. In this sentence “My aunt was teach me read a book.” You confuse about tense. You can’t use “was” you can use only “taught.” In this sentence should be “My aunt thought me to reading a book.” I found many mistakes. For example, now, you are studying. Right? But you used “I study at Nakhon Pathom Rajabhat university” you must say that I am studying at Nakhon Pathom Rajabhat university, and the present use “on” from the prepositions.

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