Last Valentine's Day, it was holiday that match the Makha Bucha's Day. the student would give flower or chocolate before holiday. When the holiday I went to temple for making merit with my family. Last Valentine's Day, I not gave flower and chocolate with special person because I had not money.
In my opinion, I think that I can show love any day need not only a special day. I will tell love with special person (boyfriend) everyday if I have.
I think in line 4 you should put "s" in each your examples or add the article such as "a flower" like this.
ตอบลบAnd in line 7 - 8 I think you should put " , " at "when the holiday, I went to ..." because they are 2 clauses in the sentence.
What tense do you want to use ' Most people will like Valentine's Day because it was special day.' (present future or past tense)?
ตอบลบ'the student ' you have to start with capital letter in the word 'the'
'I not gave' you can't write like this because it is wrong grammar. It will better if you change to 'I didn't give flower.'
'any day need not only a special day.' did you mean everyday?
It OK
ตอบลบI think that I like your story.
ตอบลบI think you should add the article “a” before “special person”
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